Assalamo allaikum

Meri aap sey request hai keh is tehreer per ghaur karein aur phir uskey baad is section mein posting karein.... shukriyah

mein to kisi pe nuqta nahi karti bas cheeni cheeni karti hu itnni achi bachi hu mein

mere khayal se agar kisi ko postively criticize kiya jaye to ye baht acha hota he... likin insan ko dusre ka jazbaat ka khayal rakhte hue kuch bolna chahye

jazkaAllah khair for a Positive NOTE

Hum nay seekha hai
K NOTE karein k Doosray ki koan koan se khamiyaan hamein
Na Zeba lagti hain ...!!
aur os k bad doosra kaam yeh karein k
WO batein apnay andar se dhoondhein aur Khud ehtesaabi karein aur
Apnay andar se wo batein clean karein

Assalamualikum ,
Sir mein ne padha .... pahle aap hi ki baat ki jaye ke ... do satoor ,kia yeh theek hai .aap ne kitne kam waqth mein yeh tahreer kia hai mujhe pata hai .agar mujhe pata na hota toh bhi mazkoorah bala nishandehi zaroor karti .... likin mujhe bhi bahuth khoob bahuth khoob kahna chahiye ... waisey aapne ... likha acha.itne kam waqth mein .....
mein ne do satoor wali baat bhi kisi baat ke pasmanzar mein kahi hai . aap khoob samjsaktey hain .is ko na tanqeed samjhiye na taoseeffff....
Wassalam

Bilkul 2 satoor Aik shair mukamil honey key liyey 2 satoor (yani 2 misroon) ka hona zaroori hai - warna aap ki baat adhoori rehti hai. Aur aksar ham logon mein ikhtilafaat ki buniyad 'adhoori baat' hi hoti hai...

Aap ko poora poora haq hasil hai keh aap ko jo baat na'zeba lagti hai, uska izhar karein. Kyun keh insaas ka sab sey barra musleh insaan hi hai. Aur yeh bhi keh aik constructive conflict sey behtar koi shay nahin!

mein ne adhori baat nahi ki balke muqtasar ki hai . jab aap ne do kaha yane tadaad maloom hai . yane yeh satar ki jama hai . phir aap ne likha satoor ...satoor bhi jama hai ...kahne ka matlab yeh hai ke shair ke do misre ya satar hain jis ko aap ne adad mein bata diya ... phir aapne satar ki jama satoor ka istemaal kia hai . toh pahle ap ne jo tadaad batai do hai phir satoor ki do farz kar letey hain ....ab jama kijiye do jama do...4 huey .....kia yahan do satar ka istemaal sahi nahi lagta ?satoor ziyada nahi hain .kia do satraon mein likhana kafi nahi tha .

Aap kahin Urdu-e-Mu'ala to nahin

Dekhein Milestone, jab aap tehreer mein likhtey hain to aap 2 satar nahin likhtey 2 satoor likhtey hain - English mein 2 line nahin likhein gey 2 lines likhein gey - iska matlab yeh nahin keh ham 4 lines ki baat kar rahey hain - baat 2 hi lines ki hai. Magar grammer key asool key mutabiq jab 1 sey barhtey hain to woh jama'a key seeghey mein aa jata hai, to jama'a key liyey ham satoor likhein gey, satar nahin

Agar main yun likhta keh ".... jis mein SATOOR mein dil ki halat biyaan ki jati hai" to mayoob lagta - SATOOR means what? 2? 4? 10? 1000?

Agar yun likhta keh "jis mein 2 SATAR mein dil ki halat biyaan ki jati hai" yeh bhi grammer ki ru sey drust nahin - jaisey hi 2 lines ki baat hogi wahan satar nahin SATOOR aaey ga

toh yun hota hai tabsarah... apne apna nazriya peish kia aur mein ne apna .... kia aisa nahi kia jasakta ?kion baat ka ruq pheir diya jata hai .?

ab toh mujhe is baat ki tasdeeq karna padhe gi .

arey arey baat ko tool dena, ya uska rukh phairney ki soch nahin, balkeh clear karney ki zaroorat thi...

Aap ko apna nazriyah pesh karney ka poora poora haq hasil hai. Lekin jahan per aap key nazriyey ko drustgi ki zaroorat hai, aur ussey saboot key zariyey drust kiya jaa sakta hai to aap ko yeh baat seekhna chahiyey keh aap apna nazriyey drust karein . Jo nazriyah drust nahin, agar uski drustgi mil jaey, to ussey drust na karna, bewaqoofi hai . Ghalt nazriyey per arrey rehna bhi aqalmandi nahin na

Haan samjh gai mein aap ka tanz ko bhi ... mein aap ki is baat se mutafiq hoon ke nazriya durusth karloon is liye mahfooz kar liya hai . mein tasdeed kar loongi . ke meri baat kitni sahi hai aur kitni ghalat .
wassalam & Ah

Shayad aap ko meri pehli post aur us ka reply yaad ho, constructive criticism sirf un logon ko acha naih lagay ga jo seekhna nahi chahtay, main yahan doosron ki naih apni baat karon ga, doosron ki baat wesay bi gheebat hoti hai.meri pehli post aur last post ........ agar main tankid bardasht na karta to kabi na seekh pata.still I need criticism coz I will be a student till death

main aap se 100% muttafiq hun lekin yeh zaroor kahna chahungi ke jis specific baat par tanqeed ki ja rahi hai uska poora ilm naqqad ko hona chahiye warna tanqeed mahaz baraey tanqeed hojati hai.

Aslam-o-alikuam

Dear Admin!
Sirf poetry he Zindgey k kisi be muqam per jo banda Tanqeed bardasht nahi ker sakta wo agey nahi barah sakta....Jo be Person apney aap ko Mukmal samj leta hai k wo he Aqal-e-kul hai to wo dunia ka sab sey bara bewqoof hai.......Koi be banda mukmal nahi hota zindgey main seekhney key gunjaish rehti hai her jaga

Koi Computer Engineer ho poet ho ya Doctor sirf books read ker k degree ley lena kafi nahi is taiz raftaar zindgey main rooz he kuch na kuch seekhna parta hai sab ko.....Asey main kisi kaam per tanqeed ka maqsad sirf us key Islaah hoti hai na k Tang karna maqasd nahi hota...K is ko anaa ka masla bana lia jaey

sab ko he mill ker kaam kerna ho ga tab he yeh mumkin hai k Poetry ko better kia ja sakey

Walekum Asslam
Hum aap ki baat se mutafiq hain lekin aisa bhi nahi hona chahiye k kisi ek ya do ko he nishana bana ker un ki her soch per tanqeed kerni chahiye
ye bhi sahi hai k tanqeed se islah hoti hai lekin woh tanqeed islahi honi chahiye jis se kuch seekhnay ka moqa milay.........sirf ye keh dena k aap ne sahi nahi likha ye sahi nahi hai batana chahiye k is ko aisay nahi aisay likha jata to ziada behtar tha....

ok dear.....................!

g Boss

Yes sir, zaror app ki kee howi baton per amal daramad karonga >>inshallah.

me ko yeh sub parhna parega kya?

agreed main be yeh he kehta hun k Tanqeed + honi cahey na k Dil uzari k laey per jis per tanqeed ho toda wo saber karey aur dakhey k wo banda kia kehna caha raha hai........kisi key zaat ko harfe-e-Tanqeed baney rakhna he durast nahi bal k us key islaah be honi cahey

ji bilkul sahi kaha p ne............

Brother aap apni posts ko alag sey topic bana ker send karyin Thankx

aakhir parh hi lia

Nahin bachi jab tumharey apney bachey barrey ho gaey to uns sey sun lena

Masood bhai
Bilkul theek kaha k agar hum musbat tanqeed karien gay to Is say na sirf ye k dosrey ki Islah ho gi balkay hum khud aik achey naqad k tor per ubhrain gay.

walikum salam
kia ye parhna zaruri hai